BIOSHOCK: THE RAPTURE WIVES

What if Andrew Ryan & Frank Fontaine succeeded in producing the perfect Rapture Wives? And if you can't escape Rapture, you'll be turned into one too!

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ITERATION ARTIFACTS FOR WHAT REMAINS OF HANSEL & GRETEL: CHAPTER ONE

Grown-up & pregnant Gretel returns to the haunted forest to find out how she alone survived her family's curse.

Flowcharts

Initial Flowchart

Initial Flowchart

Fairy Tale vs. Truth Concept as told by Edith Finch

Revised Flowchart

Revised Flowchart

Attempt to put entire text of Original Story and concept of Truth v.s Fairy Tale into one short game becomes overloaded and lost both good storytelling and good game play

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Final Flowchart before Twine

Reduce scope to Chapter One, ensure player understands goal & obstacles, and has opportunities for independent feelings and decision making. Include preliminary source images.

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Initial Flowchart Review

Initial Flowchart Review

Revised Flowchart Review

Revised Flowchart Review

Initial Twine Playtest Feedback

Initial Twine Playtest Feedback